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My hands are cold,
My heart is colder still
Like the Ripper, Jack,
Who ripped the heart
From victim five.
I'll rip the heart
From my own chest
And stay breathing still
Only half alive.

Yours truly, not the ripper
But a ripper could I be
Like you'll be eventually.
For it begins in the heart
And already in you
The pain has a start
Like it has in me.
So how long will it be
Not me?

Nothing too good for my whore
So Baby don't lock your door
Just let me come on in
Like you did for Saucy Jacky
And i'll forgive your every fault
But don't ever think to run
For my punishments
You'll not find fun
©2006-2009 ~Mistress-Daye
:iconmistress-daye:

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I read a book about Jack the ripper and while doing so this just kind of popped out.

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:iconmistress-daye:
o.k. i'm a bit nervous about this post so please don't be too harsh people
:iconreno-dewinter:
i like it but then again im a very different kind of person.

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"Its hard to say I love you, I need you, I can't live without you, with a shotgun in my mouth!" - The Sadle Tramps
:iconhisdispute:
Whoa, thats truly wonderful. I've never read nor heard anything like that.

Good Job!
:iconmistress-daye:
i know it's been a long time since you sent me this comment but thank you so much it means a lot to me after not having been on for months to come back to so much good stuff thanks again ~Mistress Daye~

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There is nothing to fear but fear itself........ well, and starvation we might all starve-FDR
:iconlolithashiori:
This is absolutely wonderful. I'm obsessed with Jack the Ripper, & I really think you did an excellent job.

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:iconmistress-daye:
Thanks so much. Have you read The Diary of Jack the Ripper? Its an amazing book and a great read if you haven't. Thats the book that sparked this one

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There is nothing to fear but fear itself........ well, and starvation we might all starve-FDR
:iconlolithashiori:
Who's it by? & you're welcome. I'm reading a book called "Jack Knife" by Virginia Baker which takes a fictional approach. It starts off okay, but after awhile, you really get into it. It's too bad, though, that it's not pure Jack. (the book, not your writing)

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:iconmistress-daye:
i'll have to look it up for you I don't remember. I read the book about two years ago so it's been awhile but it is fabulous. Its the actual diary of the man believed to be Jack the Ripper and it has a lot to back up that assumption. It even comes complete with nasty pictures and commentary

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There is nothing to fear but fear itself........ well, and starvation we might all starve-FDR
:iconlolithashiori:
Awesome! Thanks.

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